Tai Chi
On Wednesday The girls went to Tai chi and we were getting into your lines in 4 and we had to but your feets together and put your hands together and we have to close your eyes and we have to bow down and we have to do some of the asines and all of the girls do some beaty good moves and we did the tiger and we had to get your cahir and sat down on the chair and we have to talk about what we did in the weekend and we went around the world and we were talking about your weekend and after that we started to put your chairs away and we stand on your feet and we put your hands together and bow down and it was the end of Ta chi and after that we were about to go to class we were in a line or getting in line and we walked back to class and we were having fun in tai chi and it was fun and it Because we are learning about Ta chi and it fun to go tai chi.
Please check your spelling, you spelt chairs wrong. And make sure you add punctuation.
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-Arizona