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Kia ora. I am Evelyn from Gisborne Intermediate School.I really liked how you described everything in a detailed way.I learnt that Toby’s never going to see his sister again.Maybe you could make another story and let Toby see his sister again.Mā te wā
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Kia ora. I am Evelyn from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described everything in a detailed way.
I learnt that Toby’s never going to see his sister again.
Maybe you could make another story and let Toby see his sister again.
Mā te wā
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